I was tagged by Caitlin Sinead to take part in the "My Writing Process" Blog Tour. Be sure to check out Caitlin's post too and follow her on Twitter!
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What am I working on?
I'm
polishing my YA contemporary fantasy MARK OF THE SIFTER.
Ingredients:
a guy from another plane, dream visits, super powers, fear of insanity, torture,
impossible choices. And, of course, love.
For
more details, see Projects, then scroll down.
How does my work
differ from others of its genre?
I
like speculative YA, and that's what I usually write—not sure if it differs that
much, but I tend to get compliments on the relationships in my stories. How the
characters interact and their dialogues are important to me. And while I don't create issue books, I incorporate contemporary topics, like in ROGUE
HEALER (see Projects), which combines depression and aliens.
Why do I write what I
do?
I
write the kinds of books I love to read. Writing provides a wonderful escape
from reality, and I love all my characters, even the antagonists. It's a great
opportunity to explore issues that scare me—whether it's mental illness or the
loss of a loved one—through the relative safety of a book I'm (more or less) in
control of.
How does my writing
process work?
My
writing process is a work in progress. I'm learning-by-doing. I pantsed my
first novel, and it worked well. The second and third...let's just say the road was bumpy. Which
means I'm incredibly grateful for my hard-working CPs.
Since
I ended up cutting and rewriting 35,000 words from my current WIP (yes, I'm still bleeding), I'm trying
to bring more structure into the beginning of my process, using a combination
of Dan Wells' Seven-Point-Plot Structure and the Save the Cat beat sheet.
Here are my basic steps:
- Get THE IDEA and let it stew until characters start talking to me and dialogues form in my mind.
- Create a beat sheet, brainstorm world-building and characters.
- Write the entire first draft, leaving * and comments anywhere details are missing. It usually looks like *ADD DESCRIPTION or *SETTING or *NAME or *AWKWARD.
- If I notice something isn't working, I may go back to the beginning and make major changes before completing the first draft.
- Go back and search for the * and fix them.
- Let it sit (probably not long enough).
- Make several passes for plot, timing, setting, language. Make sure chapter breaks make sense (I hate this part). Keep the beat sheet updated.
- Send to CPs.
- Revise.
- Repeat the previous two steps until I'm happy.
Oh,
and to add a bit of spice, I throw in the obligatory
this-will-never-work-I-should-just-throw-it-away agony. At least twice.
Revisions
are usually directly on screen, although I also read on my Kindle or make hard copies. The larger the expected revision, the more I like to work with paper. I
also do at least one complete read-through out loud.
These fabulous ladies are up next on the tour!
Deana Barnhart is a thirty-something writer and mom of two. She writes
YA fiction and is repped by Sarah LaPolla of the Bradford Literary Agency. She
loves, in no particular order: watching her kids sleep, reading anything that
will take her out of real life for a bit, spending time with her family and
sharing her writing journey with fabulous people like you!
An
alumna of The City College of New York and the New School's creative writing
programs, Jenn Baker is working on a linked story collection about an
interracial family as well as YA novels with diverse characters. She's been a
writer-in-residence at Ragdale, Jentel Arts, and Brush Creek Foundation for the
Arts, and her writing has appeared in Poets & Writers magazine, Eclectic
Flash, Boston Literary Magazine, and e-zines Around Harlem.com and
DinnerReviews.com.
Follow Jenn on Twitter: @jbakernyc
Follow Jenn on Twitter: @jbakernyc
Ifeoma Dennis lives on a somewhat-tedious-to-climb hill in the caribbean island of St.
Vincent, but it pays off with a good view of the ocean and the boats. She is a
medical student by day (and even at night), and a writer at all the odd scraps
of time she gets. She loves fantastical worlds of magic and beautiful
creatures, so little wonder that's what she writes!
Follow Ifeoma on Twitter: @IfeomaDennis